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May 17, 2010
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May 17, 2010, 2:55:54 PM
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Mood: Joy *PzlWksMedia May 21, 2011  Professional Photographer
I looked at your gallery and found this composition...now I do not know if you shot more compositions of this subject. But here is very strong subject and setting, that if you have moved closer and also worked at creating and experimenting with several versions...you could have harvested several excellent images. This a good composition, but there was more possible. Also your exposure is actually a little "over exposed" buy 1 stop for sure. Also the lower value would have given you more tangible emotional impact.

so you are making a very strong effort, but slow down. Take it slower, you shooting digital so bracket you exposure. The standard is +1, normal, -1 or -1.5 below what ever your meter is telling you. Often with digital cameras like the Sony they over expose. But get closer. Also you can create creative background to help maximize your subject if you will use a wider F-stop. SO in this photo your F10 at 1/1600 of a second...try F4 or F5.6 you would have gotten a much faster shutter speed, and also shoot hand held with more assurance. Start at F4 first...let the background fall out of focus. It will give you very pleasing results. This should have been a near macro shot.

I make all these comments as your trying to make a step to a higher level of artistic statement, but yet missing the gold ring...so to speak. I my comments will help.
Best Regards and thanks again for the FAV of ICE Empress.
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~kawaiifiire May 24, 2011  Student General Artist
This plant actually had a new flower this year, and I took some photos of it. I might submit them soon. :nod:
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~kawaiifiire May 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks ;p
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~kawaiifiire Apr 26, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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awesome scene and pretty flower
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~kawaiifiire May 17, 2010  Student General Artist
thanks =D
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~kawaiifiire May 17, 2010  Student General Artist
thanks =D
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